Snow Angel

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Heck, it's cold and snowing here!

Snow Angel

Cold frosty crystals,

falling in the night...

covering the ground,

in a blanket of white...

I cuddle my pillow,

under warm sheets...

I gently dream,

as I fall asleep...

I wake in the night,

or I think I do...

I'm still asleep,

dreaming of you...

I stumble...

mumble and grumble,

as I wake...

Look out the window,

and I know...

It wasn't a dream,

it was real after all...

I see you...

your image in the snow,

my snow angel...

the love of my heart,

your wings...

left in the snow,

our dreams in the dark,

so many dreams...

that no one knows...

My snow angel,

falling in the night...

cold frosty crystals,

covering my heart...

living in my dreams,

covering my love...

covering me...

thru out the night,

covering me...

in a blanket of white...

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Rhymer commented on Snow Angel

01-11-2011

A simply captivating poem from beginning to end. Nice write.

oldgoat

01/12/2011

Thank you so much! I'm kinda of a dreamer and romantic at heart, even tho I will deny it if ask! lol!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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