snuggle....

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This happened years ago..... The love of my life let me snuggle with her... I had a longing since those two nights.... I just didn't understand how strongly I love you... Its growing fore more and more... Is it one sided........?

snuggle....



       




   Can we just snuggle......
You are safe with me......
I get so little response........
It leaves me thinking....
I'm trying to hard.......
And that leaves me sinking.....

                     How do you feel......
        You respond so little.......
 Are your feelings to deep?
                      You think your love I want to steal........

                        Broken sentences......
            Sometimes little emotions........
     I'm pouring out me does......
                        This leave a caption.....

        I can only say how I feel......
                   I know... Wow big deal......
          Same ole story song... Can we dance......

                    I want hard core romance....

 I am just me...,
Just loving you.....
Sad to see.....
          I want words too.....


             Why so hard.... For me....
How about you...... ?
      I just want more.....
                  Conversation....
             To match the simulation!

                     Are you nervous as me......
       I might hurt you.......
                        Hurt me then.... You don't want too.......
Your tender....
Soft and kind.......

                       I refuse to stay up......
           Just thinking of you.......
I got to go to sleep......
       


             Thinking of you....
                       To much for me.....
       I keep writing......
                     You and me......



 I want more....
More....
More..
More.
                    More what.....
                 More of  you.........

              The time I get......
                      Is less.....
             Maybe I'm making it a mess!
                    Maybe I'll try to love you...
                                    Less!




              Complexed redbloodink  
 

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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

toredbloodink’s Poems (71)

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