so far apart

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    so far apart

    if it kills me inside just to say goodbye
    then how can i live without you
    if the words i used to know now corrupt my soul
    then how can i live without you
    if all my world has caved cuz you arnt in my day
    then how can i live without you
    without you....oh how can i live

    my world revolves around you
    your the breath within my heart
    i just cant make it through
    if we areso far apart
    so far apart

    if my world crashes down when your not around
    then how can i live without you
    if my tears are falling when your not calling
    then how can i livewithout you
    if my heart cannot breath when your not near
    then how can i live without you
    without you....oh how can i live

    my world revolves around you
    your the breath within my heart
    i just cant make it through
    if we areso far apart
    so far apart

    i need you in my life so i can survive
    its only cuz of you that im still alive
    without you....oh how can i live

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    Chaos128 commented on so far apart

    07-18-2010

    Now, this is what you call a "torch song" if I've ever seen one.

    dahlusion commented on so far apart

    06-21-2010

    So a beautiful lament for the one you long for. Bravo!!

    Rhymer commented on so far apart

    04-10-2010

    The longing to see the absent love. So well written the emotions flow from the page to grasp the reader. 10 from me.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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