so far apart

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    so far apart

     if it kills me inside just to say goodbye
    then how can i live without you
    if the words i used to know now corrupt my soul
    then how can i live without you
    if all my world has caved cuz you arnt in my day
    then how can i live without you
    without you....oh how can i live

    my world revolves around you
    your the breath within my heart
    i just cant make it through
    if we areso far apart
    so far apart

    if my world crashes down when your not around
    then how can i live without you
    if my tears are falling when your not calling
    then how can i livewithout you
    if my heart cannot breath when your not near
    then how can i live without you
    without you....oh how can i live

    my world revolves around you
    your the breath within my heart
    i just cant make it through
    if we areso far apart
    so far apart

    i need you in my life so i can survive
    its only cuz of you that im still alive
    without you....oh how can i live

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    Chaos128 commented on so far apart

    07-18-2010

    Now, this is what you call a "torch song" if I've ever seen one.
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    dahlusion commented on so far apart

    06-21-2010

    So a beautiful lament for the one you long for. Bravo!!
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    Rhymer commented on so far apart

    04-10-2010

    The longing to see the absent love. So well written the emotions flow from the page to grasp the reader. 10 from me.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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