So far, Untitled

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    So far, Untitled

    So far, untitled.

     

    I watched you from a distance

                At first

    Observing your giving nature

                I saw

    A patient man

     

    A forgiving man

                Who would

    Allow me my indulgences and

                Embrace

    Me for all that I

               

    Cannot help to be

                Falling

    In love with you

                One day

    At a time we have

     

    Hope for a future

                Unknown

    What trials we’ll face

                Together

    The answer awaits us

     

    In…

     

    Our land of forever

                Begins with now

     

    51110914PMJean Marie

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    devaamido commented on So far, Untitled

    07-10-2010

    ... hopefully it will remain unnamed & therefore avoid dying in the box of somebody's classification scheme. a beautiful ephemeral work.

    jeanpnkldyg

    07/10/2010

    Grateful that you took the time to read.....AND respond so poetically.

    dahlusion commented on So far, Untitled

    07-02-2010

    "Cannot help to be Falling In love with you One day At a time we have"—a poetic gem! bravo!!

    jeanpnkldyg

    07/02/2010

    I am humbled by such a kind critique from someone I consider a master. Thank you.

    Merlyn commented on So far, Untitled

    06-27-2010

    I pray God's blessing on you for a future you live to find. Beautiful. Hopeful, and brave you are.

    jeanpnkldyg

    06/27/2010

    Thank you.

    kdarcy commented on So far, Untitled

    05-30-2010

    I like it, interesting layout. Allowing indulgences ... is good, works both ways. Keep on takin the pen to paper, easier when you are motivated, be well, k

    jeanpnkldyg

    05/31/2010

    Thanks K. for commenting and bringing me back to center. :) Glad to see you are, too.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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