So genuine, So innocent, So pure


So genuine, So innocent, So pure

Your touch surprised me. So genuine, so innocent. As we sit here peaceful enjoying the air. Your touch surprised me. Not knowing how to act, making it hard to relax.
To share that one single moment in time. I didn't realize I was missing anything, intell your touch surprised me.
I can't think of even one single time, I've ever felt the intensity of your touch. So genuine, So innocent, so pure.
A gentle touch, act of compassion, I've never been given. Thank you so much my friend, for sharing with me your genuine touch and the soft words from  your lips. I didn't realize I was missing, genuine innocents in peaceful air.
To you my friend I'll never forget. For showing me your gentle touch.
                                  Your touch surprised me...

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alb29oclfl commented on So genuine, So innocent, So pure


a fitting tribute to one of our more enjoyable sense's, a joy to read



Thank you. The bad thing is... All I kept thinking was touch me, touch me... lol

lithiumblack commented on So genuine, So innocent, So pure


Damn. This is just such an incredible work of art. An overwhelming testament of gratitude and love unlike any I've ever read. An easy 10, but it deserves much higher.



Thank you.. I wish I was as confident as you have faith in my words. Thanks for the encouragement...

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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