Solitude

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wrote this while i was in the psychiatric hospital

Solitude

The rain beats
upon the pools of solemn hopes.
I look through stagnant air
and feel my sanity slipping.
The overwhelming urge to be free.
To pulsate with the rain
and it's steady rhythmic flow.
To emanate thine earthly mother.
What pleasure the dream brings,
and what disparity reality forces.
Everything seems so foggy,
how I yearn for lucidity.
My soul is caged,
trapped from the truth.
Shackles bind my eternal triumph.
Weights crush all my resistance.
Only one thought is addressed:
No one
can hear
what you say
in solitude.

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A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Tony’s Poems (79)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Escape 0
Simplicity 1
Unser Leben....Our Life 0
Nie...Never 0
Freedom 0
Recoil 0
Du & Me 0
Lass Uns Rennen....Let Us Run 0
Menschen...Hu
mans
0
Wiederholung.
..Repitition
0
Balance 0
Finality 1
Zusammen...To
gether
0
Für Dich....For You 1
Mein Geist....My Mind 0
Uns.....Us 0
Fall......Fal
l
0
Falschen Anschuldigung
en...False Accusations
0
Sicherheit...
Safety
0
Brech Aus...Break Out 0
Shadow 0
Cold 0
Certitude 0
Truth 0
Consciousness 0
Sacrifice 0
Two Become One 0
Sleep 0
Broken 1
Punishment 0
Reality 0
Warranted Infliction 0
Sky 1
Solitude 0
Future 0
Lies 0
Rules 1
Unavoidable 0
Empty 0
Maze 0
Alone 0
Sporadic 0
Struggle 0
Impossible 0
Ambush 0
Life's Song 0
Geh....Go 0
Nicht Mehr.......No More 0
"Gods" 1
Wonders 0
Das Ende.....The End 0
Vengance 0
Obstacle 0
Gone 0
Ewigkeit....E
ternity
0
Release 0
Hidden 2
Incapable 1
Breakdown 1
Guardian Soldiers 1
One Who Once Was 0
Creative Process 0
What Am I? 1
The Overpowering Desire 5
Spirit 1
Insanity 2
Constantly 1
Present Existence 5
Pain Inside 1
Liebe.... Love 1
Banning Books 3
Iron Man 0
What You Do 2
Someone 9
IDK 6
Deprivation 12
In Return 3
Identity 3
It 5