Some day


  • Meldarth

Poem Commentary

I just listened to the words; what they wanted to paint this time.

Some day

Violet streaks through the air,
As dawn breaks,
Sun stretches his sleeply arms,

Hues of reds,
Oranges fly among the clouds,
Breakfast skipped again,

Work calls,
A job to anyone but me,
Pride in my sleepy smile,

The days before me,
Come and go,
Like grains of sand,

Drip, Drip, Drip,
Catching moments,
Between each breath of time,

Some day is before me,
In my minds eye,
There doesn't lie happiness,

Possiblities of some days though,
Lay in decisions,
Fate loves to roll the dice,

Yet I won't just be victim of fate,
Dancing in the winds of time,
Aimlessly and without purpose,

My time is before me,
I know what is out there,
Chains will not shackle me,

Nor will I lower myself,
They can keep their depravity,
Hells of their making,

Walking the path of my chosing,
Time passes as he always does,
Fate she smiles,

In a moment of thought,
A lifetime passes before all,
Just as it looks to end,

Begins again with a new thought,
Turning of the key,
With that a new day begins.

Clinton '13

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Loopyerloulou commented on Some day


The unicorn thinks you like your new job and sunrises but perhaps not so much the mornings themselves? I hear you I like sunrise but not the early ones *yawn!*



yea no more caffine for you missy this early in the morning ;)

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Meldarth’s Poems (29)

Title Comments
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Patience and Duck Tape. 0
The Cage and Madness of Darkness 0
Darkness Rises 0
Some day 1
Fate 0
A New Day part II 0
A new day 0
Illusion of Alone 2
Echoes of Future Past 0
Wise words; or a foolish dream 4
A talk with Life 0
Dreams of Life 0
Life 1
Atlas holding my World 1
Voyage of Dreams 0
Capturing of a moment. 1
Here we go 1
Blink of Time 2
Feeling of Tears 2
The Pain of Truth 17
A Summer's Day 33
World of a 2 year old 8
Dream a little Dream 5
Light of Hope 1
Hollow Nights 2
Childhood 1
The Phoenix 1
The Night 1
Fields of Gold 1