somebody help me

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i wrote this when i was going through deep depression of being an unwanted teen......

somebody help me

I'm trapped inside and cant get out,
I'm always crying myself to sleep,
I'm frightened and really need help,
I try to talk to my parents but they just send me away,
I try with my friends, but i just can't,
It seems that there's only one that cares,
GOD.
but besides him,
NObody cares,
NObody wants me,
I just need help,
I need somone to crack my shell! please if you hear my screams of help, please come and find me and set me free.

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honesty34 commented on somebody help me

07-28-2009

wow ..this peom is real emotional..I know the pain..I've been there b4 when I was ur age..great job on your writing skills ..your very talented..

twilightchick

07/28/2009

thank you, that really means alot to me. when i read this in front of my class one day, they sent me striaght to the councelors office, then after that they made me go to counseling. so i dont read my poems to anyone except my closest friends

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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