"Somebody stop me!"

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    For those who have seen the movie The Mask, remember when The Mask would say ,"somebody stop me " ? Well I liked it , and I like to say it during my drum solo.

    "Somebody stop me!"

    Black clouds,
    thunderous storm,
    like wild horses from the skies.

    Angry gods shake up the earth
    to challenge would be unwise.

    Lightning strikes with every crash
    from discs above the black.

    Rhythmic thuds,heavy thumps,
    like cannons sending flak.

    My sweat falls like treacherous rain,
    arms swing,like the blur of the hummingbird wing.

    Such beautiful noise,say my neighbors speak
    and to think,a lack of rhythm,and this would all be weak.

    But not today,this is my song
    I will not can not stop,
    my heartbeat will go on.

    "Somebody stop me!"

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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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