SOMEONE STRONG

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  • monkyntz
  • IF YOU DON'T HAVE A PRAYER NOT EVEN HELL WILL LET YOU IN

Poem Commentary

this poem is about living with a woman who
Can't Understand Normal Thinking








SOMEONE STRONG

you need someone strong
someone who can carry couches
someone to hold your hand
when you cross the street
but someone without a tongue
someone who doesn't bleed

you need someone strong
someone who can carry couches
but someone who knows his place
and knows your every need
someone you can bend over
or someone on his knees

you need someone strong
someone who can carry coughes
someone to pick up your slack
no matter how much it weighs
someone who can be your friend
but someone you can hate

you need someone strong
someone who can carry couches
someone you can put your arms around
without getting a disease
you need someone really strong
thank god that someone isn't me

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therejected commented on SOMEONE STRONG

10-10-2009

i found this to be rather humorous and not really angry

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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