Someone

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  • Love

    Someone

    Someone to hold
    Someone to care
    Someone who is bold
    Someone who is there

    Someone to wipe away the tears
    Someone to take away the pain
    Someone who knows all your fears
    Someone who loves you even with the weight you gain

    Someone to kiss goodnight
    Someone to make you smile
    Someone who hugs you tight
    Someone who will go that extra mile

    Someone to lean on to
    Someone to make you their wife
    Someone who wants you for you
    Someone who is here for the rest of your life

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    monkyntz commented on Someone

    07-04-2009

    i thought this was very good you were definiley in love when you wrote this, no doubt about it. i've read a few of your poems now and you are very good at getting your point across. you make the reader feel just what you feel no bullshit right to the point

    tinybutmighty85

    11/20/2010

    I actually wasn't in love when I wrote that poem. I was lonely and that is what I was wanting at the time

    dahlusion commented on Someone

    02-22-2009

    This poem would be a smoother read without the "Someone" starting each line.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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