Somethin' Has Got To Give

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  • FLAWLES
  • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

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Somethin’s got to give, cause life’s too short. I refuse to get smoked, like a cheap Newport. I’mma keep my head up, stand firm and tall. I started off walkin, I refused to crawl.

Somethin' Has Got To Give

I got chains around my neck, but I’m gonna get free.
Too many people that I know, hate for me to be me.
They say my voice is too loud, my views are negative.
I’m a victim of hypocrisy, somethin’s got to give.
But when you love the ones you hate, you tend to get dizzy.
Is life supposed to be hard, or supposed to be easy?
Sometimes I ask myself, was I born too late?
It ain’t easy living in hell, knocking on Heaven’s gate.
We got drugs around the corner, guns down the street.
Police rollin thru my hood, tryin to shackle my feet.
I’m jumpin thru hoops, tryin to dodge the law.
You’re good surviving the day, not getting socked in the jaw.
From sun-up to sun-down, my face sports a frown,
From a system that’s designed, to keep me on the ground.
But I keep myself focused, and stay positive.
Like I said once before, somethin’s got to give.
I’m walkin thru a dark tunnel, and at the end there’s a light.
But the system’s like a blindfold, blockin my sight.
I’m tired of avoiding obstacles, and fallin in holes.
But my body’s full of heart, and I ain’t sellin my soul.
Please don’t get me wrong, I’m not complainin or bitchin.
But some people are like a virus, and they keeping me itchin.
Sometimes I hate to wake up, but I got a life to live.
Yeah, here we go again, somethin’s got to give.

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Len commented on Somethin' Has Got To Give

06-11-2011

Good Job! The pace and flow was excellent. Your control of the mix of logic and multiple emotions makes a complex issue easy to understand and relate to by any and everybody. Again Good Job!!!!

FLAWLES

06/25/2011

Hello Len. Thank you for your kind words and compliments.

Mrpoetry commented on Somethin' Has Got To Give

07-24-2009

great poem..............................................

FLAWLES

07/24/2009

And if it doesn't, we're gonna make it give.

tsgirl commented on Somethin' Has Got To Give

07-21-2009

Well done wow you said it the way I like it,I was capture with shackles on my feet, but you see I escaped with victory, and the life we live has to be a life of positive, if you live that way you can't go wrong. By the way I just discovered you and will be reading more of your work. 1 luv

FLAWLES

07/21/2009

Thank you very much for your comments. I would be honored if you DID, take the time to read more of my work.

lightcourier commented on Somethin' Has Got To Give

07-19-2009

I really enjoyed this! Insightful, struggling song of determination. ThanksNice work! !

FLAWLES

07/19/2009

Thank you for your comments. Life is an on-going struggle.

poetrygal45 commented on Somethin' Has Got To Give

07-17-2009

Love it, love it, love it, I like your words, your heart, your soul. bless you. 10

FLAWLES

07/17/2009

This was one of my exploding sessions. Luv ya pg.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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