Something Sweet

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This Poem is to show the world that sometimes things are not as bad as they may seem

Something Sweet

I take you deep into my mind.
Something missing I can not find.
Could this thing be under here?
A little whisper in your ear.
Something you would love to see.
Sun setting slowly with a breeze.
A little tree by the creek.
Shades the light as it sleeps.
There is an Angel standing by.
Looking sad enough to cry.
A Dragon lost forever more.
The Dragon has closed the door.
To his everlasting burning heart.
No fire burns in this part.
The pain of love has gone to far.
No more wishing on some magic star.
The world to him has turned its back.
Were there was light it is only black.
Something most will never know.
We hold on tight no letting go.
The past is always right behind.
Caught forever lost in time.
As I show you little things.
Like the price of all your dreams.
Sit with me don't make a sound.
You feel your feet touch the ground.
My only wish was for peace.
Now Angels cry out with grief.
From all the times that we weep.
I see the world threw Dragon eyes.
Something of a great surprise.
I found the thing that I forgot.
Hidden so well and hard to spot.
A little spark in my Dragon heart.
I can now see where we must start.
So for now I say good by.
As the tears roll from my eyes.
I take you now back to your life.
Before I go to bed tonight.
I ask for you to be alright.
I ask the Dragons and Angles all to pray.
To make this thing we call love stay.


By @{Dragon}

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deathkid commented on Something Sweet

01-05-2011

i love it for a 13 year old little daddys girl :) ~katie marie

DragonAngel

01/08/2011

thank you

koolmom0 commented on Something Sweet

10-25-2009

I like this, it paints a nice picture in my mind. Koolmom

lovinsmind commented on Something Sweet

06-07-2009

i like this i write in the same rhyming style. which is hard to find nowadays i understand there are other methods but have always wrote my own work that way(in rhymes) i mean gees it worked for silverstein and other why not i? lol i enjoyed this and ill be back to read more i do love the fantasy theme as well. ttyl take care and blessed be

DragonAngel

06/07/2009

thank you very much

SilverGirl commented on Something Sweet

06-06-2009

repetitive only in rhyme.. i do apologize if you took the that wrong way.. It bounces with the essence of your love!

SilverGirl commented on Something Sweet

06-06-2009

Duuuuuddddddde...Oh my goodness.. what a wondrful, heartfelt poem.. Very sweet indeed. Oh, but to be loved so dearly by one heart.. would be a dream come true. .You express your feelings freely, as your words of precious love carry your heart to the one you love. Nice movement.. a start.. a middle.. an end.. You captivated my hearts interest. I can only imagine what the heart of your true love feels like.. Totally awesome.. !!! Although it is repetitive.. I do not find it redundant, nor boring..Hugs.. SilverGirl

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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