Something's amiss

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    Something's amiss

     Something's amiss.

    Deep inside,
    The chambers of my aching heart,
    I feel something's amiss,
    I feel a disturbance in the force,
    I don't know what it is,
    But something's not right.
    How could I feel this way,
    After all of this,
    Why am I depressed,
    When nothing is wrong?
    When everything goes right,
    Why do my emotions go left?
    After all is said is done,
    Why do I feel lonelier, 
    Than I ever have?
    Why do I have urges,
    To slice my flesh,
    And let the blood,
    Pour from my veins,
    And leave my body?

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    jj1562 commented on Something's amiss

    02-26-2013

    If you ever need help i suffered the same horrid deases and crippling addiction. Why? Because its just that, an addiction, something strong and unintelligible but you are stronger and you are smarter than this! I love you and hope you can find happiness. If you ever need to talk. . .
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    farmermason

    02/26/2013

    Thank you. I love you too. And it means a lot. thank you so much.

    Tempy commented on Something's amiss

    02-25-2013

    Finally pushed people far enough that you find you bring it on yourself? Ppl enforce loneliness then wonder why
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