Somewhere,Someone

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    Somewhere,Someone

    Somewhere,Someone

    Somewhere someone is so all alone.......
    Someone declares thier love is true and forever......
    Along with a doesen roses ment just for her.....
    Somewhere out there another's lost and gone......
    A doesen is laid upon a stone......
    Sometimes we forget there's no garentees........
    Try t be aware of what's important,true,and precious.......
    For there are some are reminded to late.....
    To have seen war,sick with shame and who's to blame........
    I just wish you were here.......

     

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    am2anangel commented on Somewhere,Someone

    07-03-2009

    well done. However how do you feel about constructive criticism? There are a few typos. doesen should be dozen, unless you had another purpose for spelling it that way. If so, I apologize. 3rd line their love not thier. 4th line meant not ment. 7th line garentees is guarantees. 8th sentence try to be its just a t. Wow! Do I sound like a pain or what? I'm sorry I like your poem and message it gives. I just wish for your poem to be fully appreciated without being muddled with errors. Trust me I am no where close to perfect. I just know I hate it when I have mistakes in my work, and hope someone will point them out to me. Please don't take this the wrong way. I do like your poem.
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    Kukia

    07/04/2009

    As I stated in a responce,no offence taken hun.hehe...Despite my poor spelling,I'm glad you liked it^_^

    kittman101 commented on Somewhere,Someone

    07-01-2009

    this is a great poem, i also loved the picture. In my mind i could see you on a distant land. perhaps over seas. I know how hard it is when you love someone who cant be with you. Keep up the good work.
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