Son

As I watch you grow,
more and more each day,
my love for you grows too.
When I see your smile,
my soul is at peace,
and I can't remember my life before you.







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hdmac commented on Son

08-01-2009

Simple and to the point. I don't really like the common letters at the beginning of your sentences.

xntric commented on Son

07-29-2009

I have a son that is 13 now and I can really relate. No other love compares.

poetictrisha28

08/06/2009

Thanks for the comments!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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