Song of Separation

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    Just a song I wrote on separation. Hope to perfect it with your help.

    Song of Separation

    Here's a song I write to you sanely in love

    I wanna write you fast and short

    That my words may reach you sooner.

    Whenever you feel our love's boat in rough weather,

    Think that it's just a passing storm;

    That the serene season isn't far.

     

    Yeah this is my song I write to you sanely love.

    I close my eyes to see you laugh.

    I whisper the words you ever wanna hear.

    I say them over and over that you may hear.

     

    Here's that song I write to you sanely in love. 

    When I think that you belong to time and place another,

    Or that I know nothing of your thoughts, 

    I feel a tinge of envy not part of love,

    Or is that what they call love?

    This is my song I write to you sanely in love.  

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    gogant commented on Song of Separation

    03-11-2010

    We sometimes have a hard time with the true meaning of love...but, maybe we are better off not knowing.......let it be as it is..............g
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    abraham

    03/12/2010

    We all accept we don't know what true love is but we all think we know what love is! Thanks gogant for passing by.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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