Sorry

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    Sorry
    Never heard of this before
    that poems ,
    you can't edit.
    I know,I know,
    their working for a fix
    but I still just don't get it !

    So for the one I wrote
    last night ( really was this morn. )
    I apologize to all-as now
    you've been forewarned.

    It should be Scars
    not Scares, you see,
    but each could cause thr other,
    so now that begin to think-
    I do not feel
    so bothered.

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    dahlusion commented on Sorry

    09-21-2009

    Typos, tiptoes, big nose, big bird, misspelled words, who cares as long as the message comes across, and yours always comes across loud and clear.
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    mspoetris

    09/21/2009

    dah- it is soooo good to hear from you, and hope all is well.

    Hanna commented on Sorry

    07-08-2009

    typos are nothing to be sorry for- although the poem sends a message of thr whole EDIT deal- and more importantly that some typos are really are brains on full speed thinking for us ahead of our time.
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    lightcourier commented on Sorry

    05-04-2009

    Not yours! But I've read poems that i thought the whole poem was a typo! lol I say leave the typos in for the character!
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    lightcourier commented on Sorry

    05-04-2009

    very very funny. Thanks!
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    bandit1192 commented on Sorry

    02-18-2009

    I liked this. Maybe I can Help. You're going to have to delete and rewrite. That's all I've been able to do. Anyone else?
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