soulmates

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this peom is meant for two voices a male and a female 
the female parts bolded
& the male parts are in italic
parts that are meant to be spoken by both male and female are underlined

soulmates

I’m
F             
a              A
l               p
l               a
i               r
n             t
g             
confused…         
not knowing what to…
think…
do…
feel…
love…
trust…
B            
r              I
e             n
a              s
k              i
i               d
n             e
g             
scattered…        
I need someone to pick up the pieces of my
mind…
soul…
heart…
entire being…
C            
o             G
n             o
t              n
r              e
o            
l              
Again…                
I don’t know if I will ever get it back
no, never.
E             
t             
e             L
r              o
n             s
I               t
t             
y             

spent…                
looking for
me, no
you, maybe
both you and I, yes
                F                              T             
B             o                             o             B
o             u                             g              o
t              n                             e             u
h             d                             t              n
                                               h             d
                                              e            
                                                r             
forever…                            
made that way
you just accidentally resembled
my jigsaw.


NO KNOLEDGE

of what I just did
causes instant pain
S – T – F – B
O – O – R – O
U – R – O – D
L – N – M – Y
to seek…



I
don’t
know
what
for



there strange
gravitational pull
towards something…
instant…                              
earning to be closer
to what…





ME
COMPLETELY
in one piece
no longer
confused
ME I scream again with my mind not voice
control still gone
come
come
here comes the pain
burning


I
hear
her
cry in my mind
how strange
answering my thoughts



C
O
M
E

I
T
S

B
U
R
N
I
N
G


burning
burning
I feel her pain
or
is it mine
I cannot tell
it doesn’t matter
all
that matters is the
burning
burning
B-U-R-N-I-N-G
burning deep within my
H
E
A
R
T
forever it seems
burning
burning
B-U-R-N-I-N-G
S
T
O
P
its her the one
I’m meant to be with




I
can see it’s
the way it’s
meant to be
old Souls
reunited once again
                M
N             O
O             R
                E
searching for my
control
conscience
self



together I know
now that’s how were
supposed to be
I can
feel her
hear her
see her
only her
hyperactive senses
attuned to her


no longer
burning pain
only burning to be with



YOU
eternity ahead
now that we’re
TOGETHER.

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StandingBear commented on soulmates

07-30-2009

A highly creative take on the male and female voices relating to one another in this perplexing jigsaw write. Great write.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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