Spanish Fly

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  • False Love

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    What will a man do to bring happiness into his life?

    Spanish Fly

    Oh! Spanish Fly?
    Open the loins of love.
    Allow my girth to succumb.
    Filling her exposed glove.

    Oh! Spanish Fly?
    What are your rules of engagement?
    Was she willing before your affectionate bite.
    Might love have been her intention.

    Oh! Spanish Fly?
    What brought me to your doorstep?
    Have I become so weakened by chase?
    I implore this evil cunning.
    Have my senses been replaced?

    Oh! Spanish Fly?
    Engorged proboscis.
    Waiting to explode.
    Time will tell when love prevails.

    Oh! Spanish Fly?
    Does this encounter have longevity?
    Do you bring another fleeting moment?
    Leaving the breath of regret upon my lips.
    And continued sorrow on my heart.



     

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    Tempy commented on Spanish Fly

    01-29-2010

    I esspecially enjoyed the last two lines. It was a nice read.

    lucky62

    01/31/2010

    Tempy glad you found my work and liked it. If you enjoyed this one feel free to read my others.......

    chubbc commented on Spanish Fly

    01-29-2010

    damn i loved that poem it was bold intense strong sensual and was a great read i love the opening lines...Open the loins of love. Allow my girth to succumb. Filling her exposed glove. all together a great poem

    lucky62

    01/29/2010

    Chubb you is the man thanks for the great comment......

    crimsondragon commented on Spanish Fly

    01-27-2010

    nice read stop and think read again light bulb ding again nice one

    lucky62

    01/27/2010

    Well done my deep red dragon, died you do a double take or what..

    Waterwizard2005 commented on Spanish Fly

    01-27-2010

    It sounds formal yet passionate and odd in a good way. I might not be understanding all of it due to me taking things too literally sometimes. Great Poem!

    lucky62

    01/27/2010

    Waterwizard I attempted to show that sometimes we will do anything to find love even lie cheat and steal....thanks lucky62

    redbloodink commented on Spanish Fly

    01-26-2010

    Love is more then this... Love is all things endured in each others imperfections to make a perfection of two becoming one... red... btw nice write....

    lucky62

    01/26/2010

    I'm glad you got my point this being an attempt at eluding to the desperation of longing for love...... Thanks for the comment....

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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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