Spinning Rings

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

Spinning Rings

I’ve never been a girl who cared for things that glitter
I don’t know how you came up with the money
To by those silver wedding rings that would spin
I laughed when you said, you liked to spin it round an round

As we stood there before the county clerk that day
I swore I’d love you, no matter the difference in age
To say, I do, gave my heart joy, just to see you smile
Now I can only see that precious smile in my dreams

I’ll never forget the way you loved me so tenderly
I counted all the minutes ticking away each day
Waiting by the door, and greeted you with a kiss, when you got home
Now I greet you each night in those precious dreams

That job you took was hard on you everyday
But you said I was worth all your sweat
To come home to me each day, just to see me smile
Now you see me smile when you come into my dreams

I don’t know why God took you from me so soon
But we loved a lifetimes worth, in the time we had
And I know you have blessed my every nights dream
I’ll hold your hand again my love, in Heaven, and still be wearing your ring

Written by
Asha
2010
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ginga commented on Spinning Rings

08-21-2010

Asha, A poignant and precious story that is lovely. ginga

ApaqRasgirl

08/21/2010

thank you dear, this was a true story, and we both had a good laugh over the rings, which is still on my finger........love asha

SavVySam commented on Spinning Rings

08-18-2010

Hello Asha~I agree with our dear friend MindNumbing below...you do shine in this piece...you have a beautiful heart, and it is showing

ApaqRasgirl

08/18/2010

thank you dear, you all really know how to make this country girl smile with your sweet words about my little humble words from my heart.........I am thrilled you enjoyed it........thanks........and I just wrote my first sonnet, I hope it passes the test.....lol........loves ya asha

MindNumbing commented on Spinning Rings

08-18-2010

Wonderful, Asha... this is so filled with love and a hope that most people would have lost in your situation. Your inner light shines brightly in this beautiful write!

ApaqRasgirl

08/18/2010

thank you dear for that sweet comment........he was my soulmate in this life and will be again when my time comes........thus I could never forget him or let that love die........even though I will move on he will always own most of my heart.........thanks glad you liked it........loves ya asha

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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