Spring

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    I change it a bit...wish u like it..thank you

    Spring

     how sweet, how enticing
    when all is fresh
    all is green,
    the spring of love
    has just started
    where the garden
    of feelings
    are in bloom
    It's when emotions' rain
    pour again
    bringing nostalgia
    to the land it fell,
    where bewitching  scent
    of carnal flowers blossomed
    to puff
    its sweet sensual smell
    and force its way
    to each and every nostril..

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    Kanicki commented on Spring

    11-06-2010

    What a great write! Winter, Spring Summer Fall-ing in love is grand:) Wow Chaos is a hoot; damn pheromones to kick it all to hell; hey Chaos com'on you know falling in love is a big slice of heaven on earth:) LOL.10+
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    stellar

    11/27/2010

    thank you so much...^_^ v

    Chaos128 commented on Spring

    11-06-2010

    Ha ha Ain’t life a blip? You get everything in order and your life all organized then, out of nowhere, here come those damn pheromones to kick it all to hell.
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    Kanicki

    11/06/2010

    Chaos you're a hoot:) perhaps you just prefer the 'mones' with out the 'pher' nothing to fear dear you'll be even more organized with the right one by your side...LOL.

    Artie commented on Spring

    09-26-2010

    Very nice write my friend. Seasons have a way of capturing, and producing emotions and moods in us all, and you really bring that feeling to life here. Excellent- 10 from me
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    stellar

    09/26/2010

    this is from my earlier write...it makes my face red but for better or for worst I must accept not just my best but also the worst because they are a part of me...^_^ v

    Rhymer commented on Spring

    12-17-2009

    Your words provide excellent imagery to the reader so we all can enjoy the vision of spring.
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    lunamarie commented on Spring

    12-17-2009

    Dear Stellar, .... mmmm .... yes, yes ....... Luna
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    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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