Stand in Numbers

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    This came as a simple comment ( from a special k friend ) and has been revised a bit due to a poets recognition.

    Stand in Numbers

      


             A tree alone, say are you,
             but trees, by nature, 
             are rarely, just few.

             Though some might be,
             sparse and bare,
             all stand,
             hold tight,
             to the wild winds' scare.
            
            

             Adored.
             Abhorred.
             we harbor
             a gut filled sense,

             Knowing time less
            than a blink,
             Poof!
             No, not one
             would care less.
            
            



       


                          
                         
                           

             
            

           
             
           

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    dahlusion commented on Stand in Numbers

    10-01-2009

    A perfect metaphorical write on the never-ending need for a true friend — one true friend is worth more that a dozen o.k. friends. Beautiful write!
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    mspoetris

    10/02/2009

    Thank you dah!

    Hampton commented on Stand in Numbers

    09-17-2009

    There is definitely safety in numbers but one must be cautious as true friends are as rare as the great redwood on the plains of Kansas.
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    gogant commented on Stand in Numbers

    09-09-2009

    The tree is loved by nature and all those that nourish along with it, and they do bend with the wind, and become stronger by it. But "friends" somehow aren't so resolved, nor resilient as to do so. My kind of poem, definitely...
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    mspoetris

    09/15/2009

    Thank you, my dear gogant.

    StandingBear commented on Stand in Numbers

    07-19-2009

    Friends can definitely be few and far between. One moment close as ever and the next .. cold and distant. Great write.
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    mspoetris

    09/15/2009

    Thank you, S.B

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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