starry night

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this poem may make sense to some, and it may not make sense to others. many may get it and others may not. its all about the way you want to look at it.

starry night

The way you brighten the sky at night,
you seem afraid of the dark.

Are you afraid of the dark?

Is that why you glow at night?

Keeping the sky free of darkness!

In the sky you dont show how you glow,you just do.

In your frame, standing still, you brighten the sky of the earth!

You make people cry because of your beauty.

In the night your bright,
but your not 
there when your friend, the sun, is out having 
Fun. 

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786mona commented on starry night

06-15-2010

i like this piece:) nice job!!

Artie commented on starry night

06-15-2010

This is a very thought provoking piece. I like how you worded this - 10 from me

FranzJ commented on starry night

06-15-2010

the moon has been the subject of many poems and stories - and don't forget about lunatics

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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