Stars In Your Eyes

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    Stars In Your Eyes

    Thinking about you and wanting you here. Holding you close and caressing your hair. I want us there, right there, in each others arms. No worries no cares, it's like the world is ours. We're apart, but soon we'll be together. Forever, never ending, even through the worst of weather. Is it true, do you want me, will you ever let me go? Because of you, this road is true, and I finally know. Your the one, honey bun, your my long lost treasure. No pressure, I just want you with me, and we can make this last forever. Your kisses, your touch, your words, and your mind. How happy I am that you've made them all mine. I'm yours, be sure, I'll never leave your side. Stick by you, see you through and never make you cry. Look at you, beautiful, my love is true, this you know. Never question, let it be. Just believe in you and me. Don't forget, your son, raise him up as my own. My daughter, little girl, can she be, a part of your world? We'll play basketball, and Pokemon, hit the beach and have some fun. Picture perfect, life is great. Picture perfect, just you wait. Never ending, you and me. Like the stars in your eyes, we will always be.

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    LadyL714 commented on Stars In Your Eyes

    09-14-2009

    this is a beautiful poem...I hope it happens for you.

    poetsara113 commented on Stars In Your Eyes

    08-15-2009

    i really liked this has a nice flow to it..very beautiful

    HarverTomsson commented on Stars In Your Eyes

    06-09-2009

    This is prose. But emotional prose at that. If I grade this one on candor and openness, will you promise to make more utilization of the power of metaphor? Perhaps in our crazy anything goes literary world, this is one huge fundamental that separates prose from poetry. You did get three in at the very end.

    Realistic commented on Stars In Your Eyes

    01-31-2009

    sweet man. I love to read this kind of emotion worded so delicatly. Nice flow to this one.

    painz commented on Stars In Your Eyes

    01-29-2009

    happy you are so must we all like you

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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