Stars

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  • Nature

    Stars

    I stand below you.
    Wishing I could be up there with you.

    You shine like thousands of little dimonds down on me.
    I am free when I look at you.

    You clear my mind of all its troubles.
    I feel like nothings wrong.

    You are the stars above me.
    You are the place people dream.

    You are free.
    You have no laws.
    You have no roads,
    no walls to tie you down.
    No one to hold you back.

    You are the stars brightly shining in the night sky.

    By
    Rebecca

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    WordSlinger commented on Stars

    07-11-2009

    I feel the same way about the nights sky. This is a good write to me. I enjoyed it. I love nature poems.

    Qualin commented on Stars

    06-25-2009

    I have tried to write you three times...every time I get to the end of the letter I have beenl kicked back...Ill try to get this oine done I have a studio and stay in it had 3 songs to chart one went to number one in Europe I beleive you have the abiility to convert your material to songs or I could try I would like to be a friend reguardless...think I've made it this time,,,Qualin

    dahlusion commented on Stars

    05-06-2009

    A mystical beauty and poetic gem.

    Drivingczar commented on Stars

    04-28-2009

    Reminds me a bit of a great song "starrider" by a great band "foreigner". Great write.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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