Stay?

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  • Confusion

    Stay?

    Why do you spread yourself so thin,
    Why is it with you I never win,
    Never first, second or even last,
    Like I'm the one who hurt you in the past,
    Why do you treat me this way,
    What is your mood going to be like today,
    You used to treat me so well,
    I can see how quickly that went to hell,
    You are the reason our relationship went so deep,
    Now to you our love is too steep,
    My head tells me to run away,
    My heart tells me I need to stay,
    I don't know what I need to do,
    The more I think the more I stew,
    So maybe this should be good-bye,
    So maybe I can leave with my head held high.










     

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    Teardrops commented on Stay?

    05-16-2010

    I hope the poem isnt true and if it is run you deserve better . Great write you said it all in a few words loved it Marie

    harmony74 commented on Stay?

    03-26-2010

    well done! the land of confusion eh. Lift ur head up and pray : ) The land of not knowing is no fun fer sher..however time does tell

    ecw316 commented on Stay?

    01-23-2010

    the poem is good one of the best i red on her write mor like it they will be just as good

    am2anangel commented on Stay?

    11-26-2009

    Excellent write. A true portrayal of indecision in the face of a broken relationship. Showing your desire to get out with some dignity left. Well done.

    rapnerd72 commented on Stay?

    10-28-2009

    I love the texture of you poem. I can relate to the meaning of your expression.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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