Still in my thoughts and head.

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  • Amber041792
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I know rhyming is NOT my thing, but I thought it was good for this kind of poem. This is something I'm going through right now and I don't really know how to go about this. I just wish I could have the courage to tell her or talk to her or something.

Still in my thoughts and head.

This one is about one of the most amazing people I could meet.
No one can be beat.
She knows all my secrets and thoughts,
yet she still won't give me a chance.
I think I could make her happy,
I could be handy and make her dandy.
I don't see her much,
but I wish I could see her a bunch.
All we will ever be is friends with something there,
I just wish I clear the air without a scare.


The other one is so mysterious.
She looks so serious.
I get the feeling of wanting to get to know her,
I just wish I could stop looking at her, I swear!
I am to much of a coward to introduce myself,
but I really want to take my heart of the shelf.


You both are so different,
yet have so many similarities.
Things you both have in common,
you won't stay out of my head and thoughts.
I just wish I could make something happen with one of you,
but I can't so I stay blue.

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Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Amber041792’s Poems (95)

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