still wondering

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    • edgee
    • 2021....New Year, New Things

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    was inspired by a young lady whom i have had pleasure to exchange conversation with, you know who you are that inspire me to be the me i know i wanna be and need to be......

    still wondering

     i got this thought in my head not much clearer than a cloudy day....my sky not the greatest, my smile not the brightest....my sword is dull becuz of the battles lost from not being attentive, not being the me i know i am supposed to be....i feel i have been taken from myself....sorry for things i have yet to do, sorry for things i didint even think but been thrust upon me....my tears invisible but there, no-one knows it but me, secrets well kept even from myself....some-one in my eyes i have yet to see, not just outside but beyuond anything in passing....so beautiful the outside, so cool the inside but have yet to know if it could be returned....something not yet to know but wonders how the thoughts process, woniders what's beyond the eyes, wonders what's behind the smile, what would be the key to open her heart....
    ....still wondering but never the courage to sask, still trying to find the right words, like a good love song taking the time to make it right and taking the right to make the time, we making important the things that matter the most....we shouold see....
    ....still wondering....
              
                                       -Edward Orlando Griffin

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    deedeemcgee commented on still wondering

    09-25-2009

    great work, keep it up. In moving I have lost my best poems, any suggestions for writers block
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    edgee

    09/27/2009

    well write about the writers block you are having and you never know, yuo might break that block

    Kdaddy commented on still wondering

    09-14-2009

    Nice poem. Inspiration comes from all sources of life, such a beautiful thing! well done.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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