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    tears shed with every beat as the sadness continues to grow
    deep inside i cannot hide even the saddest of sorrows
    though tomorrow is another day i simply do not care
    for this shadow which lies within follows me everywhere
    it almost saddens me to say i cannot feel a thing
    its almost as if death has me riding on its wings
    my flesh and blood no longer warm
    but cold like that of a winter storm
    my heart shattered ripped out and broken
    happiness joy amusement stolen
    life was good even great
    then you handed me a different plate
    i took a bite of what you could offer
    i wanted it then but now no longer
    first the sweets then came the sours
    where i would simply cry for hours
    you would tell me lies which i would believe
    yet in the end you had never loved me
    i gave you all i had every part of me
    all i did was love you so why cant you see
    what you have done is killing me inside
    my deepest sorrows i still cannot hide
    day after day my tears have shed
    sometimes feeling like my soul is dead
    what have you done why did you do this
    my life was happy with nothing amiss
    you fucked with my sole and broke my heart
    you tore my fucking world apart
    i still cry every damn day
    because of you treating me that way
    tears shed with every beat as the sadness continues to grow
    deep inside i cannot hide even the saddest of sorrows
    though tomorrow is another day i simply do not care
    for this shadow which lies within follows me everywhere
    it almost saddens me to say i cannot feel a thing
    its almost as if death has me riding on its wings
    my flesh and blood no longer warm
    but cold like that of a winter storm
    my heart shattered ripped out and broken
    happiness joy amusement stolen

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    MarionYost commented on stolen

    12-19-2009

    AWESOME! This is my kind of poem DEFINITELY A 10 In my book.. Very outspoken Great write! All the best -Marion-

    banginmoma

    12/19/2009

    thankyou dear. i appreciate it

    redbloodink commented on stolen

    12-19-2009

    Bang let me first say.... great write.... I would also like to say in all this world.... nothing or no-one can make any-one happy.... as I live as a woman I'm the happiest I've ever been... not because I do live as a woman for the most part... it's I just found my own happiness.... I know now that I need some-one that has her own happiness... and we have to get along the best we can..... I guess this is what most people truly want aswell.... great wirte.... Red

    wamomo commented on stolen

    12-19-2009

    You did an amazing job of expressing the deep and tormenting pain that love can bring....keep your chin up and keep using your writing toward healing!! ...bravo!

    Chaos128 commented on stolen

    12-19-2009

    Very affecting verse,banginmoma. Situations like this are always painful at first but, thankfully, it's true that "time heals all wounds". Excellent work!

    dangedmanjr commented on stolen

    12-19-2009

    ouch...that is one hell of a description of heart break!...i can feel a portion of that! well done!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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