Stormy

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    Stormy

    Stormy

     

    Angel tempest guard my soul

    I feel your heart upon me

     

    Throw your fiery kisses

    Anchor me to love’s storm

     

    Hold my lustrous fury

    Bind our blinding thrust

     

    Dwell radiant and gleaming

    In eternal lust

     

    -M, Jacobs

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    whiteoleander commented on Stormy

    12-14-2009

    very sensual.. nice work have you read mine making love?? it takes my a whole page to place the same amount of emotion you do in a few lines bravo!

    danmartyjake1

    12/21/2009

    Yes. I appreciate your work very much. Thanks for noticing mine, as well.

    lunamarie commented on Stormy

    11-24-2009

    hhmmm ... what we all want, yes? ............ Luna

    danmartyjake1

    12/02/2009

    I'm glad you liked it. Thanks.

    knight4696 commented on Stormy

    11-23-2009

    This is extremely sensual ... A very nice job. Sometimes a few words is all it takes!! Great Job!! .... Ken

    danmartyjake1

    12/02/2009

    again thanks Ken, for reading and for your comments. I appreciate them and it is helpful to get feedback from others that see and understand the threads of your expressions.

    dahlusion commented on Stormy

    11-20-2009

    "Dwell radiant and gleaming In eternal lust" — so erotically rich in expression.

    danmartyjake1

    12/02/2009

    thanks for that. I sure needed to hear that comment.

    Grito commented on Stormy

    09-05-2009

    Luxurious and lacivious, diety of eros, cupid's shelter in the storm.

    danmartyjake1

    09/06/2009

    I like your interpretation of my poem, cupid's shelter, diety of eros,, thanks for your comments.

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