Strange Desperation

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    Strange Desperation

    This strange desperation,
      an urge,
    to do some creation,
       a desire,
    to get some Ovation,

    This strange desperation,
    A dissatisfied need,
    nobody can it heed,
    A dormant seed,
    like a rusted bead,

    This strange desperation,
    on our backs like a hunch,  
    of broken dreams a dreary bunch,
    In our eyes,a hasty shine,
    like getting hungry at quarter to nine,

    This strange desperation,
    like a blackhole,
    That engulfs us all,
    like a noisy busy track,
    that makes our brains crack,

    This strange desperation,
    like "Will-O-The-Wisp"
    That makes us all lisp,
    a strange strange feel,
    Ending all our zeal!!!!

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    optimistic commented on Strange Desperation

    08-17-2009

    Very different style of writting I like the way you twist words to create a great poem.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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