Stranger Nowadays

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Stranger Nowadays

At times I sit and think from time to time

Open my heart and see from eye to eye
Felt your energy rip with fright until it outgrew me 
As I saw it I saw the blood it was to drip right through me
Can't you see that you knew all along
That you'd turn your back saying
Stay strong
Don't mutter to me
Your words no longer fuel me
The actions beyond your words
Are reasons enough for me
Walked away from me
Little did I realise
The favour you did me
Little too healthy and wise 
Take me to the ocean
As I swim beyond too sea
Found myself yrs later
Floating in a lake
Feeling like ghia 
Peace is all I take
And your peace
Well it shatters and it breaks
Take me away
To a love that don't decay 
Keep me safe and 
Say it's all okay!

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musicbox commented on Stranger Nowadays

06-02-2013

I love this poem! It really spoke to me and you executed it brilliantly. well done!

pura

06/02/2013

I'm glad you liked it :) thankyou

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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