STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT

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THIS POEM IS NOT ABOUT ANYONE BUT CREATES A CAPTURED MOMENT IN TIME. LIVES ONLY IN THE MEMORY OF A PASSING SHIP GONE BY.

STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT

WE WERE STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT
AS WE HELD EACH OTHER TIGHT
NOT CARING ABOUT THE MOMENT
JUST STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT
YOU TOLD ME YOUR PROBLEMS
I CRIED OUT WITH MINE
FOR TOGETHER AGAIN WOULD NEVER BE
JUST STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT
ALL WE DID WAS HELD EACH OTHER TIGHT
NOT THINKING ABOUT TOMARROW
ONLY TO FILL MORTAL NEEDS
YOU THANKED ME FOR THE SPLENDER
I YOU FOR HOLDING ME TIGHT
UNDER THE STARS TOGEGHTER
 YOUR COMFORT MENT A LOT
NOW YOU HAVE GONE YOUR WAY
I HAVE GONE MINE
JUST TWO STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT
NEVER TO SEE EACH OTHER AGAIN
I WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER
THE MOMENTS WE SHARED
TWO STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT
THAT SIMPLY HELD EACH OTHER TIGHT

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Bettysrainbow48 commented on STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT

01-08-2010

This key board is something else, sorry about the typo. Together is what it should say..

blackfootlady commented on STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT

12-13-2009

Yes ,I love this Betty because when friend can't understand.It's the stranger that often finds your hand.Churv

Bettysrainbow48

12/18/2009

Thank you

BigDaddyCash commented on STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT

11-30-2009

We were strangers when you joined my circle of friends... You circled in on the wing of a dove and read my poetry from beginning to end. And now in this time and place I feel your love. Your poetic magic is bold and strong, I read it like I'd sing a song. Gentle, caring an sweet. LOL, BDC

Bettysrainbow48

11/30/2009

WILLIAM MY POETRY LIKE YOU IS DONE IN MANY WAYS ,SOMETIMES BOLD YES LOL BUT NOT ALWAYS ABOUT ME.LIKE YOU I COME UP WITH IDEAS.I DO LOVE LIFE AND PEOPLE.THANK YOU SO MUCH. I ALSO LIKE TO WWRITE CHILDRENS POETRY AND SHORT STORIES.I HAVE WROTE OVER 500 POEMS NOW BUT NOT ALL ON THIS SIGHT.THIS IS MY FAVORITE NOW.COMMUNICATING WITH OTHERS LIKE US IS FUN AND REWARDING.

Bettysrainbow48

12/18/2009

My son wanted to write a song out of this.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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