Stripped

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THis poem is about a stripper and the feelings that person had.

Stripped

Stripped

Dancing

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Twirling

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Music whurling

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Abusing,Using

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Identiy and humanity

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Meaning and lose of feeling

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A drunkards vitality


She is

Stripped

Morality

Stripped

Condescending and never ending

Stripped

Not just of clothes

But body and soul

She’s

stripped

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ginga commented on Stripped

08-26-2010

Britt, THis is certainly a word that whittles something down to its essence. I could feel the diminishing emotional pathos throughout. ginga

BrittKun

08/29/2010

Wow thanks Some poem you need to put your self in the person perspective think of how up would feel or think being in there shoes. Thanks for your support Britt

gogant commented on Stripped

08-26-2010

Sometimes they smile as they disrobe, their body is their gold as the eyes gaze upon the beauty that she wears.......You have a wonderful feel for poetry, Britt...........be proud of what you create...

BrittKun

08/26/2010

Thanks. I knew a person who was a stripper and thought I could write in there point of view how they feel inside instead of how they look outside. Thanks for the comment and the support Britt

ApaqRasgirl commented on Stripped

08-26-2010

wow that was a powerful statement this write made, wonderful job, your metaphors worked very well in this......thanks for the fantastic read.......love asha

BrittKun

08/26/2010

your welcome thanks for the comment!!!

ApaqRasgirl

08/26/2010

thank you dear, if you need help with anything just give me a holler. I will help with whatever I can.......love and light be with you...***Namaste.....asha

Teardrops commented on Stripped

08-26-2010

This is a good outlet for hurt and a way to heal . But its time to walk away sometimes you just cant help make a life for yourself you deserve it Marie

BrittKun

08/26/2010

yeah someone i knew was a stripper and I though for a moment how they would feel always being exposed!!

Mareann commented on Stripped

08-26-2010

I could hear lyric's in this write easily... Words many women can identtfy with... vet nice write, Mary

BrittKun

08/26/2010

thanks I have written things that could be songs i just haven come you with the notes yet on my guitar

Mareann

08/26/2010

We have music composers on my website that you might want to meet, when you have the time... Mary

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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