Stripped

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    Poem Commentary

    THis poem is about a stripper and the feelings that person had.

    Stripped

    Stripped

    Dancing

    Stripped

    Twirling

    Stripped

    Music whurling

    Stripped

    Abusing,Using

    Stripped

    Identiy and humanity

    Stripped

    Meaning and lose of feeling

    Stripped

    A drunkards vitality


    She is

    Stripped

    Morality

    Stripped

    Condescending and never ending

    Stripped

    Not just of clothes

    But body and soul

    She’s

    stripped

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    ginga commented on Stripped

    08-26-2010

    Britt, THis is certainly a word that whittles something down to its essence. I could feel the diminishing emotional pathos throughout. ginga
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    BrittKun

    08/29/2010

    Wow thanks Some poem you need to put your self in the person perspective think of how up would feel or think being in there shoes. Thanks for your support Britt

    gogant commented on Stripped

    08-26-2010

    Sometimes they smile as they disrobe, their body is their gold as the eyes gaze upon the beauty that she wears.......You have a wonderful feel for poetry, Britt...........be proud of what you create...
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    BrittKun

    08/26/2010

    Thanks. I knew a person who was a stripper and thought I could write in there point of view how they feel inside instead of how they look outside. Thanks for the comment and the support Britt

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Stripped

    08-26-2010

    wow that was a powerful statement this write made, wonderful job, your metaphors worked very well in this......thanks for the fantastic read.......love asha
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    BrittKun

    08/26/2010

    your welcome thanks for the comment!!!

    ApaqRasgirl

    08/26/2010

    thank you dear, if you need help with anything just give me a holler. I will help with whatever I can.......love and light be with you...***Namaste.....asha

    Teardrops commented on Stripped

    08-26-2010

    This is a good outlet for hurt and a way to heal . But its time to walk away sometimes you just cant help make a life for yourself you deserve it Marie
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    BrittKun

    08/26/2010

    yeah someone i knew was a stripper and I though for a moment how they would feel always being exposed!!

    Mareann commented on Stripped

    08-26-2010

    I could hear lyric's in this write easily... Words many women can identtfy with... vet nice write, Mary
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    BrittKun

    08/26/2010

    thanks I have written things that could be songs i just haven come you with the notes yet on my guitar

    Mareann

    08/26/2010

    We have music composers on my website that you might want to meet, when you have the time... Mary

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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