Stripped

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    Stripped

    I am a lady who wears a disguise.
    This whore who protects me is beginning to fail.
    Realizing the error of my ways, the mask is lost.
    Beneath this costume, lies a truth.
    Halloween is over, I feel naked.

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    hdmac commented on Stripped

    06-12-2009

    So this whole thing is about halloween? Or is it just being used as a symbol for your pain? Interesting.

    aggieprof commented on Stripped

    03-25-2009

    Very good. I also like the last line, particularly after the first.

    hx commented on Stripped

    01-23-2009

    Nice indeed. Last line is great.

    hx commented on Stripped

    11-25-2008

    Very nice indeed - brevity with absolutely nothing lost. Well done, keep it up.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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