Subliminal Thoughts

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Subliminal Thoughts

We speak our minds

Free to say what we please

Together we share our finds

Then begin to flirt and tease

Subliminal Thoughts

You leave so obviously Unspoken

The longer we do this, The harder we'll be Broken.

For we talk for hours till' Tired

Careless and dazed by the Hour

As We hold, We leave, Shot's Unfired

For so Long, we begin to be Sour

Subliminal Thoughts

NO longer are these thought's loving they are filled with Anger.

Only realizing how stupid we were when one another's in Danger.

Imaturely the cycle is swirved and Repeated.

Hurting ourselves intentionally,to see if another's still Caring.

Our hearts cold and bitter as it's been Mistreated.

Finally when we feel we're over, is our sincerity Bearing.

Subliminal Thoughts

Unnecessarily Scarring the souls of the Departed

Should be shared before they overflow the heavy Hearted.

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Mandi commented on Subliminal Thoughts

10-04-2009

I liked this what are you using the caps for ? emphasis? the style ws unique I'd ventrue to say you do well in school ( if you are still in )

Phoenix9 commented on Subliminal Thoughts

01-10-2009

vwey well written

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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