SUCCESS

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    SUCCESS

     I find myself searching for something, that others say cannot be attained,
    if only connecting the dots, were as easy as the saying.
    but my success is not determined by what others perceive
    but by me being persistent in doing what i believe,
    must be done, for my goals to be achieved,
    my success is inevitable as long as i believe.

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    Kaleidoscope commented on SUCCESS

    11-10-2009

    Now this is good.. QUiTTing Is not an option in your book and you said it quite well..And your options are not what others want of you but what you want for yourself.. Nice
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    Lyrix

    12/24/2009

    yeah... cause people will have you go the extra mile for their own benefit. So my take on it is ima just do what i want

    ApatheticFish commented on SUCCESS

    05-28-2009

    This is very uplifting and encouraging. Persistence in the face of adversity is always a good theme. Nice work!
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    bluepetal commented on SUCCESS

    05-27-2009

    nice poem shot though but very nice it swings along very nicely and easy to understand and relate to well done
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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