Succubus

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I made it up off the top of my head.. hope you guys like it

Succubus

A broken glass, stained with blood
a broken heart, stained by you
A whole new fear, I cling to
A whole new hell, from me to you

The darkness comes; light is gone
Hate rises, as the moon falls
Your nothing but ash; a pile of dust
I sweep you up, and yet you stay

Ashes are left, memories of hell
These things I found in you
I am lost, for I am ill
you are a succubus

I'm not well, I am sick
Demented is what I am
Because of you, I am dead
but only on the inside

I am dead, and so are you
at least I have my heart
unlike you, I'm not cold
you are demon-scum

Your hands are red, with my blood
My bed is empty, only tears
Your bed is tainted, as you are
I pray that you will die

Memories haunt me, don't they you?
Or are you still to cold
You see nothing, I see shadows
you're still a succubus

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Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Venom637’s Poems (35)

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Curse from God 0
Tainted 2
Gothic Christmas 1
Shattered Souls 1
Blank 2
I am darkness 0
I could only try 1
Broken 2
Cloak 0
This is it 3
My prayer 4
Escape 2
Alone 2
Tainted 2
Succubus 0
Reflection 3
Twisted 1
Stripped Away 3
Dead Man's dance 3
Darkness Rang 1
One Thorn 2
Life 1
Insane 0
FairyTale 0
Lost 1
Mislead 0
Dead 1
Dead once more 2
The roses were red 2
For the life we live 0
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Against my will 2
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Sea of Lies 5
Ten Black Roses 9