Suicidal Intent
Alone I swirl, a maelstrom of thought and grief.
Intent alone kills my hope and dream,
And now I shudder and deem,
The suicide that action would wreak.
Suicidal Intent
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graceladymn commented on Suicidal Intent
10-14-2009
- Most times we just need to stand in the center, actions can bring havoc when it is the wrong time. Well graphed simple piece packed with thought.
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Stand commented on Suicidal Intent
10-13-2009
- Oh, this is so sad! But good I think it's really good. I like the play on words. My type of writing!
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