Suicidal Rampage

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    Suicidal Rampage
    You who have nothing
    You who has no one
    sees no value....
    understands nothing
    Born in the abyss of blackness
    death is all you know
    Scars cover your arms, legs
    No shame, it's your escape
    seeking a reunion of souls from yesterday
    peace speaks unto you
    ears turn off....
    pain pours like rain from your heart
    you are rigid
    you are uncaring
    you want to welcome death
    a way to escape
    your everlasting pain
    I refuse to give in....You are someone
    I reached your soul....you shed tears
    I kissed your soul.... barriers broke
    I...healed your soul...from your...Suicidal Rampage

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    optimistic commented on Suicidal Rampage

    06-28-2009

    This right here is a very creative piece. you value the soul of antohter and the value in the poem shows piece by piece.
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    TheLastPoet commented on Suicidal Rampage

    03-31-2009

    "You who have nothing You who has no one sees no value...." That right there pulled me in My type of poem 10!!!!
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