Sunshine (Haiku)

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    Sunshine (Haiku)

     Sunshine blinds my eyes
    Just look away I say
    Sunshine warms my soul

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    Madelynn commented on Sunshine (Haiku)

    04-09-2010

    Oh yessss-it does! Perfect little treat to start my day! I think your Haiku just struck magik here in midwest country- The sun just popped out behind a rain cloud, to say.."Man, that Earthly, can lay it down now, momma! She just called me out to shine by name!!"-lol!!,well..at least that's what I 'thought' it said!-then again; I still listen to my Rice Crispies 'snap, crackle, and pop!'-LOL! (oh, like YOU dont!!) lol, ;) very enjoyable Earthly!-Maddi
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    earthly

    04/19/2010

    So glad to have brightened your day as you brightened mine-TY-Namste...Earthly

    knight4696 commented on Sunshine (Haiku)

    04-03-2010

    Nice Work Earthy ... Haiku's take a lot of work to convey properly. And you certainly achieved this! :) Great job! Ken
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    MindNumbing commented on Sunshine (Haiku)

    03-25-2010

    This is a delightful little ray of sunshine, earthly :) Haiku's are fun to read but really difficult to write... bravo to you for doing it with such style and beauty :)
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    Artie commented on Sunshine (Haiku)

    03-22-2010

    Very well written -- you are good at these! 10 from me
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    earthly

    03/23/2010

    I love writing haikus-not that they are quick or easy to write-on the contrary, they often take more thought-TY friend...Earthly

    WordSlinger commented on Sunshine (Haiku)

    03-19-2010

    Cool, I like how you close your eyes after being in the sun, and everything is orange, and when you open your eyes, images slowly color up, :) ty WS
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