sure you can trust your government just ask an Indian

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  • muaddib
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sure you can trust your government just ask an Indian

and if you know them like i know them
then you know they are the masters of deception
they set you down in front of a box
and formed your mind and how it thought
taking out the spiritual part
dumb us down they perfect the art
keep us lost with an empty heart
keep us weak with tired mind
much easier to stay in line wait your turn to capitalize
follow us the so called blind
forget yourself your conscious vibe
its the same old delusions every time
but listen man there is a way to turn the tide
awaken the unshapen be alive
transcend the conditioning rewire the system
believe the words your mind keeps insisting

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soulwriter commented on sure you can trust your government just ask an Indian

07-29-2009

First of all I love the title - being of Native American Indian decent (great grandmother Cherokee - trail of tears). The abymal treatment of the ones that that formed this country is one of greatest wrongs in the history of mankind in my mind. Your convictions ring true through out this piece as your words work to speak the truth! 10 for content alone.

photochick commented on sure you can trust your government just ask an Indian

07-29-2009

very well put I agree 100 % I enjoyed this love the title as well you have a lot of powerful lines in this and you can tell this is something you feel strong about great write and message a 10 form me for sure I look forward to reading more of what you have to say

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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