Surreal world

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    Surreal world

    steady is the hand that guides me into this surreal world,
    making me his princess, his close friend and his girl.
    loving is the way he guides me into this love affair,
    promises he makesof honesty and for me, being there.
    trusting is the way he leads this untamed heart of mine,
    into a sweet surrender through the passages of time

    never before have i ever known a love of this kind,
    so giving, never wanting, so trusting all combined.
    looking into the mirror of his eyes i see myself captivated,
    by the way he makes me feel, so high and so elated.
    never will i break these promises i made to him again,
    to never lie to him and ever cause him pain.

    a heart so full of love frozen like a winters night,
    a burden so much to bare yet he's still willing to fight.
    scattered thoughts crowd the four corners of his mind,
    keeping him awake at night, a peace he couldn't find.
    a missing piece of his heart he said i was to make him feel complete,
    and for this love i'll fightand never will i accept defeat.

    i desire this love to grow passionately into bliss,
    never will i find someone as kind and loving as he is.
    i look at him with admiration of how perfect he seems to be,
    and wonder what twisted fate brought this man to me,
    something tells me that after this my life won't be the same
    and if ever he leaves, carved upon my heart would be his name.

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    truth917 commented on Surreal world

    04-10-2010

    Nicely put. I love the wording in this. You paint a nice pic for the writing

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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