Swan Lake

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    Swan Lake

    Gliding over the crystal surface of a liquid pool

    Taking in the sapphire waters that are perpetually cool

     

    Elegant wings stretching out as you both come to rest

    In a lake full of dreams splashing up to your chests

     

    Water and sunlight caress your magical forms

    Between this earth and sky you are eternally torn

     

    Angelic creatures from head to toe

    Embraced by perfection as you slowly grow

     

    Loving each other with an innocent bliss

    Never knowing the harm from a malevolent kiss

     

    Souls made of enchantment gracing each heart

    Living where miracles can one day start.

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    ginga commented on Swan Lake

    11-07-2010

    Jamie, Such pleasure is derived from reading this one. A magical tone is emananted here. ginga
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Swan Lake

    10-12-2010

    I really enjoyed this piece. Not only did you write beautiful words, the flow was exquisite. Excellent write, it brought me wonderful delight.........E
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    badwan commented on Swan Lake

    10-12-2010

    "Loving each other with an innocent bliss Never knowing the harm from a malevolent kiss" Wish we are birds to taste that kiss. regards
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    jamie7121f

    10/12/2010

    very true

    kdarcy commented on Swan Lake

    10-09-2010

    Ahhhh, the writers are the dreamers, for they can see what is both in front of then and not, and put it into words. A simple hopeful piece, a pleasure to read it, be well k
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    jamie7121f

    10/11/2010

    true true :) thank you

    dahlusion commented on Swan Lake

    09-28-2010

    This sweet but profound write calls all of us to be as perfect as swans. The imagery had me in the water. Bravo!! Peace and Light, dah
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    jamie7121f

    09/30/2010

    thank you!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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