Sweet Mystery

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Sweet Mystery

She sits in the window
Staring In the night sky.
Thoughts in her mind,
Tears in her eye.

She looks beautiful,
Tears glistening a lot.
Of what she thinks
I know not.

Of broken heart,
Of people gone;
A sweet mystery,
A sad situation's born.

An unknown thought,
Stars shining bright,
A bitter pain,
A cold dark night.

So evil I am
'Cause happy I feel
Even as i look
At those tears so real.

Maybe you'll feel sad,
Maybe you'll feel better,
But the night's mysterious,
'N you make it sweeter.

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1990lh commented on Sweet Mystery

08-15-2009

wow beautiful poem i really love it it just pulls you in. i could picture the whole scene, i could just see you watching her, so very moving, and come and peaceful. excellent you get a 10 from me

jesusfreake commented on Sweet Mystery

08-11-2009

Wow i like this poem a lot...its very bittersweet and smooth....ur words captivate me and i almost feel like u feel...i really like this poem it is extremelyy unique and very good at painting a real picture in ur head....very nice! Awesome job and extremely great poem!!

Tempy commented on Sweet Mystery

08-04-2009

very beautiful, I liked it, you should keep writing more, i'll read them when you do

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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