Sweet Touch May 4, 2009 10:30am Landmark

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Sweet Touch May 4, 2009 10:30am Landmark

Here I sat, loneliness creeping over me

I bestowed my love to you

Trusting that you would feel the same way too

Now its all over

Its only a dream I once had with you

Longing for your sweet touch is all I ever wanted

I cried so hard to let this damn feeling end

Still you’re here in my heart

Never have I ever imagined

You fill the emptiness inside me

Alone I sat here, empty and cold

Still longing for your sweet touch

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WordSlinger commented on Sweet Touch May 4, 2009 10:30am Landmark

09-18-2009

I like this alot, just one thing ok, change creeping to crept, ;)

gogant commented on Sweet Touch May 4, 2009 10:30am Landmark

09-18-2009

Now don't cry, hany.........this is a lovely poem, and, I guess it means that someone broke your tender heart...shame on him.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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