Take Flight


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    Another poem i found on my computer that i wrote awhile ago..Shortly after i got bad commits on a poem... i wrote this one

    Take Flight

    You Don't know me

    All you see is my avatar

    My Motorcycle four wheeler

    I write about  confusion

    of life

    I'm not passing judgment on


    Judgment is for the Lord God

    I spew my thoughts

    In hopes of touching someones soul

    If you don't like please

    take a flight

    May it be a wonderful flight

    You don't have to flow

    the ink

    Of negativity

    It isn't about you

    They're my thoughts


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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Take Flight


    I totally agree! Continue to write... not for the approval of others but for your own therapy. That's what the art of writing is all about.

    knight4696 commented on Take Flight


    YES BLUE!!! YOU GO GIRL!!! :) I so agree with your every word! :) Touche' ... Keep up the great work my friend! :) Ken

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Take Flight


    amen to that one dear...........you just spoke for the majority of us.......you said it so well......loved it......thanks love asha

    dahlusion commented on Take Flight


    Beautifully crafted! I am all for freedom of speech, and you have spoken your truth. bravo!! peace and light, dah

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    bluskyinthenite’s Poems (60)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Enthusiasm Fading 4
    Sorry is a empty word 6
    Invisible 5
    Break 2
    Take Flight 4
    Searching for my mojo 1
    Nature 8
    Imagine 2
    Nodin's blowing 2
    Sons Poem 3
    Son's Poem 3
    Mobile Cell phone 2
    Rock me baby 5
    Nebie know more 4
    "this trash barrel is still on fire" 4
    Total Eclipse 5
    Earth's satellite 6
    Memorial Day Weekend ~Fatality~ 7
    You Don't know Me 9
    Drive By 9
    re: son's poem 3
    RE: sons poems 1
    Evolution Distruction 3
    Nova 2
    Twinkle In His Eye's 2
    Put on hold 3
    Shadow maker under me 2
    Crying a River of Pain 5
    Cause and effect 2
    regretful sorrow 2nd 2
    Shards of ice pierce my heart 4
    regretful sorrow 6
    the chambers of insecurity 4
    I'm to blame for this 2
    Into the Universe 2
    Memories of contentment 2
    Meticulous Imperfection 3
    Storms a brewing 5
    My mental turmoil my madness 3
    Sands of Time 3
    Narcissus 3
    Steed of Steel 2
    Cranium 6
    Life is Poetry 4
    Looking Glass 3
    Broken Wings 3
    Lost 2
    Echo's threw my mind 1
    Lazy cold cold day and here ai " Sitting here looking like this!" 1
    Rest 1
    Lost in the Mind 2
    Love Lost 1
    Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain" 2
    Jalapeno Sub 3
    No regrets 4
    Stair master 1
    Lonely for your touch 2
    Rain on the Roof 2
    Life’s small struggles 3
    Auto Pilot 2