Take Me

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    • JamilahAyanna
    • It's been a 5 year dry spell, but I'm back 😘😘

    Take Me

    I'm not perfect,
    And I laugh at the thought of ever being perfect,
    I'm not the prettiest,
    Nor am I the most unattractive,
    But I am myself and nothing else,
    Nor anything less that that,
    So I have a couple bad hair days,
    Hell, I've had plenty,
    Call me a freak,
    And I just might agree with you, since I am,
    I'm loud.....really loud,
    And I can be pretty annoying,
    You're not always gonna like me,
    But you're no picnic yourself,
    So I like to argue and yell alot,
    Its not my fault,
    I'll just blame it on you....I'll do that alot,
    You can argue with me whenever you want,
    It doesn't matter,
    I'll just win the argument,
    So maybe I'm a little aggressive,
    Take the hint and don't piss me off,
    I love attention but that doesn't mean smother me to death,
    I am my own person,
    So in other words....don't try to change me,
    Only God can do so,
    I gotta be honest,
    I'm not here to impress you,
    Or your loud-mouthed parents,
    I'm sweet and kind if you deserve it,
    If we argue I must warn you,
    You...........WONT...........win,
    I'm am permitted to love everyone due to the wishes of my God,
    But don't think that also means I have to like you,
    People talk about me alot and that's fine,
    I let them,
    It amuses me,
    Oh yeah.....I cry......alot,
    Over anything important enough to cry over,
    I hope you don't mind me calling you at 4 a.m. so you can console me, If you tell me you love me then mean it,
    Cause I will raise hell on you if you try to take it back,
    If I let you in my heart and you try to escape,
    I will smother you.....just a warning,
    I'm a firecracker with class,
    And I will be treated nothing less than that of a lady,
    You will respect me for who and what I am,
    And in knowing all this,
    I would hope that deep in your heart,
    You would still be able to just...........take me!

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    phatdaddee commented on Take Me

    05-01-2010

    You mean what you say and it comes through in every line. Harsh pure truth is not easy to come by and I really appreciate it when I read it! Thank you for sharing You with us!

    JamilahAyanna

    05/03/2010

    It was my pleasure I juz think eryone deserves to kno da truth in one way or anotha...

    dahlusion commented on Take Me

    03-24-2010

    The power in this poem is awesome...bravo!!!!. Peace and Light, dah

    JamilahAyanna

    03/30/2010

    :) thank u very much....

    BrokenAngel210 commented on Take Me

    02-17-2010

    i like u gurl ur a trip....i really like the message this brings...let em no!

    HakiNatuwah1 commented on Take Me

    10-21-2009

    I LOVE YOU...^_^...and I mean that...read my piece "Untitled"

    JamilahAyanna

    10/22/2009

    Look at u payin attention 2 da poem lol ur a real sweetheart....

    Oxford commented on Take Me

    09-21-2009

    I don't mind,u,calin me at 4.I wil eva be rdi 2 console u.Ur poems re not bad.I reali lik dem.Wish I could read more of dem

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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