Take me there


  • Erotic

    Take me there

    a slow motion sensual rush

    the insatiability of tasting your thoughts
    frisks passionate letters from my fingertips

    i jump the chasm

    the unquenchability of my thirst
    turns your kiss into the tonic for my gin

    enter my acropolis

    listen as the voice of desire
    breaks the vagabond silence
    and is devoured by sweet yet senescent

    the sweet erosion of time

    the facts have been seduced away
    logic will find no home here
    and thrills will surely tuck us in tonight

    yes,yes.....take me there

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    HarverTomsson commented on Take me there


    I am already fulfilled in a relationship, but I can see a woman as passionate as you could really start some fun. Favorite line: the insatiability of tasting your thoughts You really are into HIM. Good stiff...ahem...stuff.



    Yes I am passionate yes humble in all areas of my life. Mother, daughter, friend, sister,a dn when the right man come along, lover and equal. Take care~Stay Blessed!!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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